Ww, that was great :D
I must admit, I've never seen so many disfunctional families xP
I love stroies in first person. It really ives you more of an insight to what's happeneing and peoples' personalities. I'd love to see more of this, when ever you get round to writing it. I'm also catching up with you legacy right now, too.
I think that you're a great writer, and I've never been hooked on any story as much as yours.
Keep up the good work! <3